Theek jeno ekta jhapshaa canvas.
Shaari shaari dariye chhoto chhoto shohurey flat-ghaur.
Hautaash rastar morey matha unchu kore ekla lamp post
~daupdaup korchhe fhike hoye jaowa bishaal aalo.
Durey megher opash theke chhotto shurjer dushtu lukochuri
Bujhi khelar chhole bhulei gechhe aapon udoy-tithi.
Shaada ornaar snigdho haowa bhijiye daey debdarur sheer
sheetaul shantijole.
Aar concrete-r pauth ta taukhon meghalauyer jeebaunto daurpon.
Eshauber majhei kothheke jaeno bheshe aashe mataal kaura ekta gaundho
~ bheja matir aushfut aahobaan.
Jegey othhe nabo raungey rongeen ek nobeen prithhibi.
Baurshar nikkaune mautto ek aporoop prithhibi.
Jegey othhe aamar jhapsha canvas.
Hauto abaar lagbe tatey notun raunger chhowa...
4 comments:
fantastic ...amazing...tobe bangla kobita english letters-e porte kemon lagey..ta chara kichu bolar noi. i am really happy to see u r letting the poet in you breathe. u r an wonderful artist..u paint beautiful word pictures and u r unique in your style...aaro lekho ar pran bhore bacho bondhu
sorry ritz, amar bangla font-ta emon dangerous errors dichhilo, using that is like writing bengali words in greek font!
but i'm trying to master it. when I do, I'll replace these English-worded bengali posts with real Bong :)
all i can say is dat.......SIMPLY MIND BLOWING!bhishon shundor kobita ta,blank verse er kobita ta shotti oshadharon!keep it up,correction korar moton amar capability nei karon i feel a poetess is one who lets her feelings flow without caring abt ne punctuation or other grammatical errors! I was transported 2 a different world when i read dis poem and datz why i guess i found ur poem flaw less!it was simply lovely
u let ur feelings flow without caring about nething else....u let ur thoughts flow without caring wht ne1 shall feel...and datz wht made ur poem so special and so warm!it s lovely amrita and i love it a lot!
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